Andrew!!

Here's the final rework of your design. The closeups show some of the more subtle detail. We've added a soft reverse emboss to the birds to give them a slightly carved look. The buckles and gold rings look more rounded. The green type has a rounded look and drop shadow that lifts it off the knot. We've beveled the knot for texture, and lightened the green to better contrast the green type and keep it easily readable. This is a great looking drumhead!